This is really nice! The only thing that's killing it for me is that there's not enough contrast between the foreground and background elements. There needs to be a TON more atmospher between the ark and the cliff edge. And either way more overlap, or clearly none at all. Right now, they're just in a tangent, and add the lack of atmosphere.... the ark looks like it is sitting on an extension of the cliff.
Again, this is a wonderuflly delightful piece, but that will make it even better!
Thank you! Yeah, I definitely see what you're saying the foreground doesn't separate much at all. Joko actually had a similar critique telling me to cool off the background.
My second piece for the Noah's Ark theme.
This is really nice!
ReplyDeleteThe only thing that's killing it for me is that there's not enough contrast between the foreground and background elements. There needs to be a TON more atmospher between the ark and the cliff edge. And either way more overlap, or clearly none at all. Right now, they're just in a tangent, and add the lack of atmosphere.... the ark looks like it is sitting on an extension of the cliff.
Again, this is a wonderuflly delightful piece, but that will make it even better!
Thank you! Yeah, I definitely see what you're saying the foreground doesn't separate much at all. Joko actually had a similar critique telling me to cool off the background.
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