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Tuesday, October 2, 2012

More Noah

My second piece for the Noah's Ark theme.

2 comments:

  1. This is really nice!
    The only thing that's killing it for me is that there's not enough contrast between the foreground and background elements. There needs to be a TON more atmospher between the ark and the cliff edge. And either way more overlap, or clearly none at all. Right now, they're just in a tangent, and add the lack of atmosphere.... the ark looks like it is sitting on an extension of the cliff.

    Again, this is a wonderuflly delightful piece, but that will make it even better!

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  2. Thank you! Yeah, I definitely see what you're saying the foreground doesn't separate much at all. Joko actually had a similar critique telling me to cool off the background.

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